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  • i love how people think popping someone else's zit is gross, but it's perfectly acceptable to ejaculate in someone's mouth. perspective?

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 1:54pm
  • i think the only thing we can gather from this is that you have a pimple fetish

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 3:34pm
  • I think that's more of a simile than a metaphor. -Webster

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 1:56pm
  • Ewwwwwwwww

    Submitted by zoeythepenguin on Aug 18, 10 at 1:15am
  • Not if you do it right.* *By choking her with your free hand.

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 2:00pm
  • foreshadowing?? I don't think that is the right term, this isnt a novel or a tv show, you aren't anticipating what will happen... I think simile fits better, example "then i exploded in her mouth like a pimple being popped" but thats only if you write it out... aside methaphor means--- per dictionary, "something used, or regarded as being used, to represent something else; emblem; symbol." So it's perfectly acceptable to say it was a metaphor. =)

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 5:18pm
  • Y the hell would u ever consider even doing that...?

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 4, 09 at 11:02am
  • Foreshadow...not a metaphore or simile.

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 2:00pm
  • 2:00pm thank you. Idiots.

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 2:21pm
  • that ain't right. and, grammar is important. so stfu.

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 2:47pm
  • That's fuckin' disgusting.

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 1:52pm
  • If you were distracted by a pimple, then the head wasn't very good, and there's no way you came 30 seconds later. Unless you're 15.

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 2:49pm
  • 1:54, interesting thought. It's probably only because it's the girl who has the pimple. 2:33, you're what's wrong with our world. Please die

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 2:39pm
  • 2:07 I think you mean genius, genious.

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 2:22pm
  • and she could've been giving him head way before he popped her zit, does it say "i popped this huge zit on her back when she began blowing me"? No.

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 3:47pm
  • This ducker just lost 50 pimp points damn that's some nasty shit

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 6, 09 at 4:33am
  • i LOVE popping zits too!!

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 6:33pm
  • 2:02 your so dumb. where in this text does it say "she asked me to pop her zit" fucking genious. he probably did it while she was down there and didnt notice.

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 2:07pm
  • Wow 30 seconds. Get a life

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 3:37pm
  • Wat a loser ... It takes u 30sec? After u pop her nasty zit? WTF is wrong with u?!

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 4:14pm
  • Hey idiot from 1:55...just because you can pop a pimple, doesn't mean that it's infected puss. That's what you have for a brain.

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 9:52pm
  • OMGGGGGGGGGG 30 SECONDS GETALIFEEEEEEE OMG U MUST BE 15!!!*!*!1!1! -.-'

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 3:43pm
  • The are also parallel events.

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 7, 09 at 1:20am
  • 1:55 the difference is that one fluid is shared, the other is only seen. it's not like he had pus in his mouth. i think that's what they meant.

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 7:52pm
  • spelling ≠ grammar! christ!

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 7:24pm
  • I'm 15 and I don't even cum that fast. You must just be bad. (:

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 3:07pm
  • 2:02----- How can she "ask" for him to pop her zip if her mouth is full? haven't you heard its rude to talk w/ your mouth full.

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 6, 09 at 9:47pm
  • good point 1:54 both are fine with me

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 1:56pm
  • (Names a woman)...................Jill Pearson

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 2:23pm
  • It might have taken him more than 30 seconds just because he popped it WHILE she was blowing him, he never said as she started blowing him. Which means she may have been blowing him for minutes prior to that.

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 4:59pm
  • Ok first off this was pretty good I like it....but one thing is wrong. This wouldn't be a metaphor for what was going to happen in the next 30 seconds it would be foreshadowing since it was 30 seconds prier to the explosion in her mouth.

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 4, 09 at 11:17am
  • wow, obviously, "30 seconds" is not to be taken literal at all. seriously?

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 3:22pm
  • Haha wow lol

    Submitted by anthonyrobert on Jun 10, 11 at 1:57pm
  • seems like she would have bitten the cock from the pain of the pop

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 1:58pm
  • GROSS!! isnt beastiality illegal??! what kinda monster has zits like that on their back?? yuck. oh yeah. FIRSTTTT!

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 1:52pm
  • 2:22 is a GRAMMER nazi & doesnt have a life! i think we all know what i MENT. lol take that. in the ars.

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 2:33pm
  • Some people just have an urge to pop pimples.

    Submitted by yewinnhard on Apr 15, 12 at 12:09am
  • This is a BS post anyway. Totally fake. Name one woman that would ask you to pop her zit while she's blowing you.

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 2:02pm
  • This is just discusting... wtf

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 4, 09 at 2:09am
  • So it wasn't until I came that he pointed out the glow in the dark plastic star still stuck to my forehead. Fun times.

    Submitted by Anonymous on Sep 3, 09 at 11:26pm